Re: [OPSAWG] Call for reviewers of draft-ersue-opsawg-coman-*

"Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com> Mon, 06 January 2014 11:04 UTC

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From: "Romascanu, Dan (Dan)" <dromasca@avaya.com>
To: "Ersue, Mehmet (NSN - DE/Munich)" <mehmet.ersue@nsn.com>, Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net>, "opsawg@ietf.org" <opsawg@ietf.org>
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Hi Mehmet,

One short reply on one of your answers: 




> -----Original Message-----
> From: Ersue, Mehmet (NSN - DE/Munich) [mailto:mehmet.ersue@nsn.com]
> 
> > 2. We have made an effort in the last few versions and especially in
> > this one to distinguish between the constrained devices and
> > constrained networks, but the clean-up on this issue is not complete.
> > For example section 1.6 still has text about constrained networks -
> > this section and other in which constrained networks are mentioned
> > should be carefully examined to make sure that the focus of the
> > document stays with constrained devices, and that if constrained
> networks are mentioned at all this is in the context of their
> relationship with the constrained devices.
> 
> Why strictly devices? We also have requirements discussing the
> organization of constrained networks from management pov. in section
> 3.1.

[[DR]] hmmm ... the titles of both documents in review start by 'Management of Networks with Constrained Devices'. Is it rather 'Management of Constrained Networks and Networks with Constrained Devices'? 

Dan