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Re: [OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-06.txt

Kenneth Vaughn <kvaughn@trevilon.com> Fri, 09 September 2022 20:57 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-06.txt
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Based on the comments received during the Last Call process, I:
- Updated the boilerplate text for the reference to BCP14
- Clarified the 5th paragraph of the definition of SnmpTLSAddress, and 
- and updated the revision notes of the MODULE-IDENTIFY macro to reflect the above tweak.

I believe this version resolves all comments made to date.

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Ken Vaughn

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> On Sep 9, 2022, at 3:53 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> 
> 
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG of the IETF.
> 
>        Title           : Updates to the TLS Transport Model for SNMP
>        Author          : Kenneth Vaughn
>  Filename        : draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-06.txt
>  Pages           : 31
>  Date            : 2022-09-09
> 
> Abstract:
>   This document updates the TLS Transport Model (TLSTM), as defined in
>   RFC 6353, to reflect changes necessary to support Transport Layer
>   Security Version 1.3 (TLS 1.3) and Datagram Transport Layer Security
>   Version 1.3 (DTLS 1.3), which are jointly known as "(D)TLS 1.3".
>   This document is compatible with (D)TLS 1.2 and is intended to be
>   compatible with future versions of SNMP and (D)TLS.
> 
>   This document updates the SNMP-TLS-TM-MIB as defined in RFC 6353.
> 
> 
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update/
> 
> There is also an HTML version available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-06.html
> 
> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-06
> 
> 
> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
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