Re: [OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-06.txt

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From: "Joe Clarke (jclarke)" <jclarke@cisco.com>
To: Kenneth Vaughn <kvaughn@trevilon.com>, "opsawg@ietf.org" <opsawg@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-06.txt
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Thanks, Ken.  Your new text addresses my concern on the use of MUST NOT.

I’m a bit disappointed we didn’t see other reviews from the directorates, but perhaps the summer doldrums are still at play.

What other comments do people have on the current draft?  If none, I’ll close the LC.  We do need a document shepherd.  If anyone is interested, please let me know.

Joe

From: OPSAWG <opsawg-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of Kenneth Vaughn <kvaughn@trevilon.com>
Date: Friday, September 9, 2022 at 4:57 PM
To: opsawg@ietf.org <opsawg@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: [OPSAWG] draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-06.txt
Based on the comments received during the Last Call process, I:
- Updated the boilerplate text for the reference to BCP14
- Clarified the 5th paragraph of the definition of SnmpTLSAddress, and
- and updated the revision notes of the MODULE-IDENTIFY macro to reflect the above tweak.

I believe this version resolves all comments made to date.

Regards,
Ken Vaughn

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On Sep 9, 2022, at 3:53 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org<mailto:internet-drafts@ietf.org> wrote:


A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
This draft is a work item of the Operations and Management Area Working Group WG of the IETF.

       Title           : Updates to the TLS Transport Model for SNMP
       Author          : Kenneth Vaughn
 Filename        : draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-06.txt
 Pages           : 31
 Date            : 2022-09-09

Abstract:
  This document updates the TLS Transport Model (TLSTM), as defined in
  RFC 6353, to reflect changes necessary to support Transport Layer
  Security Version 1.3 (TLS 1.3) and Datagram Transport Layer Security
  Version 1.3 (DTLS 1.3), which are jointly known as "(D)TLS 1.3".
  This document is compatible with (D)TLS 1.2 and is intended to be
  compatible with future versions of SNMP and (D)TLS.

  This document updates the SNMP-TLS-TM-MIB as defined in RFC 6353.


The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update/

There is also an HTML version available at:
https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-06.html

A diff from the previous version is available at:
https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-opsawg-tlstm-update-06


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