[OPSAWG] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-15: (with COMMENT)

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draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-15: No Objection

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# GEN AD review of draft-ietf-opsawg-sbom-access-15

CC @larseggert

Thanks to Russ Housley for the General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
(https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/c_Npcow_0xA8aojaPi07NMcoeaw).

## Comments

### Section 1, paragraph 3
```
     Put simply, we seek to answer two classes of questions *at scale*:
```
What does "at scale" mean here? Ask the questions to a large number of systems?
Ask the questions and expect very large results? Something else?

## Nits

All comments below are about very minor potential issues that you may choose to
address in some way - or ignore - as you see fit. Some were flagged by
automated tools (via https://github.com/larseggert/ietf-reviewtool), so there
will likely be some false positives. There is no need to let me know what you
did with these suggestions.

### Uncited references

Uncited references: `[RFC8446]`, `[RFC6242]`, and `[RFC8341]`.

### Outdated references

Reference `[RFC7231]` to `RFC7231`, which was obsoleted by `RFC9110` (this may
be on purpose).

### Grammar/style

#### Section 1, paragraph 16
```
: * on devices themselves * on a web site (e.g., via URI) * through some for
                                 ^^^^^^^^
```
Nowadays, it's more common to write this as one word.

#### Section 4, paragraph 13
```
this device. Publication dates can found inside the SBOMs."; } choice vuln-r
                                   ^^^^^
```
Make sure that the ambiguous verb form "found" is correct. (It can either be
the base form "found", or the past tense of a different verb.).

## Notes

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[`ietf-comments` tool][ICT] to automatically convert this review into
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