Re: [OPSEC] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsec-probe-attribution-05

Justin Iurman <justin.iurman@uliege.be> Sat, 17 June 2023 15:09 UTC

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Subject: Re: [OPSEC] Opsdir last call review of draft-ietf-opsec-probe-attribution-05
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Hi Linda,

The new published version (-06) clarifies what you mentioned in your 
review, to avoid any confusion. Hope it's better now.

Thanks,
Justin

On 6/8/23 18:06, Linda Dunbar via Datatracker wrote:
> Reviewer: Linda Dunbar
> Review result: Not Ready
> 
> I have reviewed this document as part of the Ops area directorate's ongoing
> effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG.  These
> comments were written primarily for the benefit of the Ops area directors.
> Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like any other
> last-call comments.
> 
> Summary:
> This document describes the method for any organizations to send queries to
> understand the received unsolicited probing packets.
> 
> Issues:
> - Are those queries generated automatically?
> - If the queries are generated automatically, does it require routers upgrade
> to support the auto-generating of those queries? - If the queries are generated
> manually, the draft should give some detailed examples since those queries will
> be generated by people not coming to IETF. - Today, most routers ignore the
> Internet probes they don't support. What are the problems of ignoring them?
> 
> Best Regards,
> Linda Dunbar
> 
> 
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