Re: [OPSEC] [IANA #1274499] expert review for draft-ietf-opsec-probe-attribution (well-known-uris)

Hi Mark,

We just published a new version (-06) that addresses your comments.

Thanks,
Justin

On 6/9/23 07:34, Mark Nottingham wrote:
> Hi Justin,
> 
>> On 9 Jun 2023, at 6:32 am, Justin Iurman <justin.iurman@uliege.be> wrote:
>>
>> Hi Mark,
>>
>> Thanks for the review. Please see inline ([JI]).
>>
>> On 6/8/23 05:07, Mark Nottingham wrote:
>>> Hi Sabrina et al,
>>> The registration is approved.
>>> Feedback on the document:
>>> * Section 2.2 says 'As defined in Section 8, the probe description file must be made available at "https://example.net/.well-known/probing.txt"'. This is not correct, as it hardcodes the domain 'example.net' and the scheme 'https'. If you want to only use the scheme 'https', that should be explicitly required (remember, Well-Known URIs are defined for many URI schemes).
>>
>> [JI] Would "/.well-known/probing.txt" be better instead?
> 
> Yes.
> 
>>> * It would be helpful to more clearly state the purpose of the Probe Description up front; to a new reader, it's not clear whether it's describing a particular probe, or a policy for probing (which could be implied by the normative reference to RFC9116). It might help to more clearly and definitely describe what a probe is and is not.
>>
>> [JI] We'll craft some text to make that clearer.
>>
>>> * What is "URI inclusion" (mentioned in Section 3)?
>>
>> [JI] "URI inclusion" is the in-band probe attribution (the mention was removed, it was rephrased based on Peter's review).
>>
>> Thanks,
>> Justin
>>
>>> Cheers,
>>>> On 8 Jun 2023, at 2:27 am, Sabrina Tanamal via RT <drafts-expert-review@iana.org> wrote:
>>>>
>>>> Hi Mark (cc: opsec wg),
>>>>
>>>> As the designated expert for the Well-Known URIs registry, can you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-opsec-probe-attribution-05 for us? Please see
>>>>
>>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsec-probe-attribution/
>>>>
>>>> The due date is June 21st.
>>>>
>>>> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, we'll make the registration at:
>>>>
>>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/well-known-uris
>>>>
>>>> Thanks,
>>>>
>>>> Sabrina Tanamal
>>>> Lead IANA Services Specialist
>>>>
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