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Re: [OPSEC] [IANA #1274499] expert review for draft-ietf-opsec-probe-attribution (well-known-uris)

Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net> Fri, 09 June 2023 05:35 UTC

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From: Mark Nottingham <mnot@mnot.net>
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Subject: Re: [OPSEC] [IANA #1274499] expert review for draft-ietf-opsec-probe-attribution (well-known-uris)
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Hi Justin,

> On 9 Jun 2023, at 6:32 am, Justin Iurman <justin.iurman@uliege.be> wrote:
> 
> Hi Mark,
> 
> Thanks for the review. Please see inline ([JI]).
> 
> On 6/8/23 05:07, Mark Nottingham wrote:
>> Hi Sabrina et al,
>> The registration is approved.
>> Feedback on the document:
>> * Section 2.2 says 'As defined in Section 8, the probe description file must be made available at "https://example.net/.well-known/probing.txt"'. This is not correct, as it hardcodes the domain 'example.net' and the scheme 'https'. If you want to only use the scheme 'https', that should be explicitly required (remember, Well-Known URIs are defined for many URI schemes).
> 
> [JI] Would "/.well-known/probing.txt" be better instead?

Yes.

>> * It would be helpful to more clearly state the purpose of the Probe Description up front; to a new reader, it's not clear whether it's describing a particular probe, or a policy for probing (which could be implied by the normative reference to RFC9116). It might help to more clearly and definitely describe what a probe is and is not.
> 
> [JI] We'll craft some text to make that clearer.
> 
>> * What is "URI inclusion" (mentioned in Section 3)?
> 
> [JI] "URI inclusion" is the in-band probe attribution (the mention was removed, it was rephrased based on Peter's review).
> 
> Thanks,
> Justin
> 
>> Cheers,
>>> On 8 Jun 2023, at 2:27 am, Sabrina Tanamal via RT <drafts-expert-review@iana.org> wrote:
>>> 
>>> Hi Mark (cc: opsec wg),
>>> 
>>> As the designated expert for the Well-Known URIs registry, can you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-opsec-probe-attribution-05 for us? Please see
>>> 
>>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-opsec-probe-attribution/
>>> 
>>> The due date is June 21st.
>>> 
>>> If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, we'll make the registration at:
>>> 
>>> https://www.iana.org/assignments/well-known-uris
>>> 
>>> Thanks,
>>> 
>>> Sabrina Tanamal
>>> Lead IANA Services Specialist
>>> 
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