[OPSEC]Re: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9424 (7964)
Warren Kumari <warren@kumari.net> Wed, 05 June 2024 18:37 UTC
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Subject: [OPSEC]Re: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9424 (7964)
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Doh! As someone who has had many many long discussions (and also participated in the FIRST TLP SIG - https://www.first.org/tlp/ ) I really should have caught that during review. Sorry, and I've marked it as VERIFIED. W On Tue, Jun 04, 2024 at 1:20 PM, James Sellwood < james.sellwood.ietf@gmail.com> wrote: > Good spot Andy. I agree those are the wrong way around. > > James > > . > > On 4 Jun 2024, at 11:12, Andrew S2 <andrew.s2@ncsc.gov.uk> wrote: > > As both an author of the document and the reporter of this errata, I > believe that this report should be verified. > > Thanks, > Andy > > -----Original Message----- > From: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Sent: Thursday, May > 30, 2024 10:09 AM > To: kirsty.ietf@gmail.com; ollie@binaryfirefly.com; james.sellwood.ietf@ > gmail.com; Andrew S2 <andrew.s2@ncsc.gov.uk>; warren@kumari.net; > mjethanandani@gmail.com; furry13@gmail.com; rbonica@juniper.net Cc: > Andrew S2 <andrew.s2@ncsc.gov.uk>; opsec@ietf.org; rfc-editor@rfc-editor. > org Subject: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9424 (7964) > > The following errata report has been submitted for RFC9424, "Indicators of > Compromise (IoCs) and Their Role in Attack Defence". > > -------------------------------------- > You may review the report below and at: > https://www.rfc-editor.org/errata/eid7964 > > -------------------------------------- > Type: Technical > Reported by: Andrew Shaw <andrew.s2@ncsc.gov.uk> > > Section: 3.2.3 > > Original Text > ------------- > At its simplest, this indicates that > the receiver may share with anyone (TLP:CLEAR), share within the defined > sharing community (TLP:GREEN), share within their organisation and their > clients (TLP:AMBER+STRICT), share just within their organisation > (TLP:AMBER), or not share with anyone outside the original specific IoC > exchange (TLP:RED). > > Corrected Text > -------------- > At its simplest, this indicates that > the receiver may share with anyone (TLP:CLEAR), share within the defined > sharing community (TLP:GREEN), share within their organisation and their > clients (TLP:AMBER), share just within their organisation > (TLP:AMBER+STRICT), or not share with anyone outside the original specific > IoC exchange (TLP:RED). > > Notes > ----- > The definitions of TLP:AMBER and TLP:AMBER+STRICT are the wrong way round > in the original text. > > Instructions: > ------------- > This erratum is currently posted as "Reported". (If it is spam, it will be > removed shortly by the RFC Production Center.) Please use "Reply All" to > discuss whether it should be verified or rejected. When a decision is > reached, the verifying party will log in to change the status and edit the > report, if necessary. > > -------------------------------------- > RFC9424 (draft-ietf-opsec-indicators-of-compromise-04) > -------------------------------------- > Title : Indicators of Compromise (IoCs) and Their Role in Attack Defence > Publication Date : August 2023 > Author(s) : K. Paine, O. Whitehouse, J. Sellwood, A. Shaw Category : > INFORMATIONAL > Source : Operational Security Capabilities for IP Network Infrastructure > Stream : IETF > Verifying Party : IESG >
- [OPSEC][Technical Errata Reported] RFC9424 (7964) RFC Errata System
- [OPSEC]Re: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9424 (7… Andrew S2
- [OPSEC]Re: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9424 (7… James Sellwood
- [OPSEC]Re: [Technical Errata Reported] RFC9424 (7… Warren Kumari