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Re: [OPSEC] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6274 (4494)

"Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com> Fri, 09 October 2015 15:22 UTC

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From: "Eric Vyncke (evyncke)" <evyncke@cisco.com>
To: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>, "fernando@gont.com.ar" <fernando@gont.com.ar>, "Benoit Claise (bclaise)" <bclaise@cisco.com>, "joelja@bogus.com" <joelja@bogus.com>, "gunter@vandevelde.cc" <gunter@vandevelde.cc>
Thread-Topic: [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6274 (4494)
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Date: Fri, 09 Oct 2015 15:22:08 +0000
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Subject: Re: [OPSEC] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC6274 (4494)
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Indeed, the text in section 3.6 should be corrected (even if it is rather
cosmetic as the error is pretty obvious).

Thanks Alexander for spotting it :-)

-éric


On 6/10/15 19:10, "RFC Errata System" <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> wrote:

>The following errata report has been submitted for RFC6274,
>"Security Assessment of the Internet Protocol Version 4".
>
>--------------------------------------
>You may review the report below and at:
>http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=6274&eid=4494
>
>--------------------------------------
>Type: Editorial
>Reported by: Alexander Okonnikov <alexander.okonnikov@gmail.com>
>
>Section: 3.6
>
>Original Text
>-------------
>In Figure 3, an attacker sends ...
>
>Corrected Text
>--------------
>In Figure 5, an attacker sends ...
>
>Notes
>-----
>Text immediately below Figure 5 incorrectly references to incorrect
>figure number 3.
>
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>
>--------------------------------------
>RFC6274 (draft-ietf-opsec-ip-security-07)
>--------------------------------------
>Title               : Security Assessment of the Internet Protocol
>Version 4
>Publication Date    : July 2011
>Author(s)           : F. Gont
>Category            : INFORMATIONAL
>Source              : Operational Security Capabilities for IP Network
>Infrastructure
>Area                : Operations and Management
>Stream              : IETF
>Verifying Party     : IESG
>

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