Re: [OSPF] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5449 (1697)

RFC Editor,

The right parenthesis is obviously missing. However, I'd disagree  
that the omission makes the text very ambiguous or confusing.

Alfred - one thing that would be more useful would be if you reviewed  
the documents during WG or IETF Last Call rather than immediately  
after they become RFCs :^)

Thanks,
Acee

On Mar 1, 2009, at 4:34 PM, RFC Errata System wrote:

>
> The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5449,
> "OSPF Multipoint Relay (MPR) Extension for Ad Hoc Networks".
>
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> You may review the report below and at:
> http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5449&eid=1697
>
> --------------------------------------
> Type: Editorial
> Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>
>
> Section: A., 2nd para
>
> Original Text
> -------------
>    The following terminology will be used in describing the  
> heuristics:
>    D(Y) is the degree of a 1-hop neighbor, router Y (where Y is a  
> member
> |  of N(i), defined as the number of neighbors of router Y, EXCLUDING
>    all the members of N(i) and EXCLUDING the router performing the
>    computation.  The proposed heuristic can then be described as
>    follows.  Begin with an empty Flooding-MPR set.  Then:
>
>
>
> Corrected Text
> --------------
>    The following terminology will be used in describing the  
> heuristics:
>    D(Y) is the degree of a 1-hop neighbor, router Y (where Y is a  
> member
> |  of N(i)), defined as the number of neighbors of router Y, EXCLUDING
>    all the members of N(i) and EXCLUDING the router performing the
>    computation.  The proposed heuristic can then be described as
>    follows.  Begin with an empty Flooding-MPR set.  Then:
>
>
>
> Notes
> -----
> A missing matching ')' makes the text very ambiguous and confusing.
>
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> --------------------------------------
> RFC5449 (draft-ietf-ospf-manet-mpr-04)
> --------------------------------------
> Title               : OSPF Multipoint Relay (MPR) Extension for Ad  
> Hoc Networks
> Publication Date    : February 2009
> Author(s)           : E. Baccelli, P. Jacquet, D. Nguyen, T. Clausen
> Category            : EXPERIMENTAL
> Source              : Open Shortest Path First IGP
> Area                : Routing
> Stream              : IETF
> Verifying Party     : IESG
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