[OSPF] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5449 (1697)

RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org> Sun, 01 March 2009 21:34 UTC

Date: Sun, 01 Mar 2009 13:34:45 -0800
Message-Id: <200903012134.n21LYjZ7003535@boreas.isi.edu>
To: Emmanuel.Baccelli@inria.fr, Philippe.Jacquet@inria.fr, dang.nguyen@crc.ca, T.Clausen@computer.org, rcallon@juniper.net, dward@cisco.com, acee@redback.com, akr@cisco.com
From: RFC Errata System <rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org>
Cc: ospf@ietf.org, ah@TR-Sys.de, rfc-editor@rfc-editor.org
Subject: [OSPF] [Editorial Errata Reported] RFC5449 (1697)
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The following errata report has been submitted for RFC5449,
"OSPF Multipoint Relay (MPR) Extension for Ad Hoc Networks".

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You may review the report below and at:
http://www.rfc-editor.org/errata_search.php?rfc=5449&eid=1697

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Type: Editorial
Reported by: Alfred Hoenes <ah@TR-Sys.de>

Section: A., 2nd para

Original Text
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   The following terminology will be used in describing the heuristics:
   D(Y) is the degree of a 1-hop neighbor, router Y (where Y is a member
|  of N(i), defined as the number of neighbors of router Y, EXCLUDING
   all the members of N(i) and EXCLUDING the router performing the
   computation.  The proposed heuristic can then be described as
   follows.  Begin with an empty Flooding-MPR set.  Then:



Corrected Text
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   The following terminology will be used in describing the heuristics:
   D(Y) is the degree of a 1-hop neighbor, router Y (where Y is a member
|  of N(i)), defined as the number of neighbors of router Y, EXCLUDING
   all the members of N(i) and EXCLUDING the router performing the
   computation.  The proposed heuristic can then be described as
   follows.  Begin with an empty Flooding-MPR set.  Then:



Notes
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A missing matching ')' makes the text very ambiguous and confusing.

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RFC5449 (draft-ietf-ospf-manet-mpr-04)
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Title               : OSPF Multipoint Relay (MPR) Extension for Ad Hoc Networks
Publication Date    : February 2009
Author(s)           : E. Baccelli, P. Jacquet, D. Nguyen, T. Clausen
Category            : EXPERIMENTAL
Source              : Open Shortest Path First IGP
Area                : Routing
Stream              : IETF
Verifying Party     : IESG

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