[P2PSIP] Review of draft-ietf-p2psip-ddr-00
Marc Petit-Huguenin <petithug@acm.org> Sun, 06 November 2011 16:40 UTC
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1. Section 6.2.2: second paragraph
The new option is defined as EXTENSIVE_ROUTING_MODE_TYPE here and in other
sections, but is define as extensive_routing_mode in the IANA registry in
section 9.1.
2. Section 6.2.2, structure definition
The enum does not follow the usual syntax:
enum { (0), DDR(1), RPR(2), (255) } RouteMode;
OverlayLink should be OverlayLinkType.
In the next paragraph, Transport should be OverlayLinkType.
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- [P2PSIP] Review of draft-ietf-p2psip-ddr-00 Marc Petit-Huguenin
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