Re: [P2PSIP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-08.txt

Zongning <zongning@huawei.com> Fri, 13 September 2013 01:30 UTC

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Hi, Gonzalo,

I just submitted revisions after checking the ID nits.
Thanks.

-Ning

> -----Original Message-----
> From: Gonzalo Camarillo [mailto:Gonzalo.Camarillo@ericsson.com]
> Sent: Thursday, September 12, 2013 8:26 PM
> To: Zongning
> Cc: p2psip@ietf.org
> Subject: Re: [P2PSIP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-08.txt
> 
> Hi,
> 
> the new revision still has the same problem:
> 
> http://tools.ietf.org/idnits?url=http://tools.ietf.org/id/draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-09.t
> xt
> 
>   == Unused Reference: 'I-D.ietf-p2psip-concepts' is defined on line
> 564, but no explicit reference was found in the text
> 
> Please, remove that reference in a new revision of the draft. Please,
> make sure the draft passes ID nits.
> 
> Thanks,
> 
> Gonzalo
> 
> On 15/07/2013 10:16 AM, Zongning wrote:
> > Hi, Gonzalo,
> >
> > It should be removed. My apologies!
> > I will fix it in next revision.
> >
> > -Ning
> >
> >> -----Original Message-----
> >> From: p2psip-bounces@ietf.org [mailto:p2psip-bounces@ietf.org] On Behalf
> Of
> >> Gonzalo Camarillo
> >> Sent: Monday, July 15, 2013 3:04 PM
> >> To: p2psip@ietf.org
> >> Subject: Re: [P2PSIP] I-D Action: draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-08.txt
> >>
> >> Hi,
> >>
> >> this revision does not seem to reference the concepts draft any longer
> >> but still has the draft under Informational References.
> >>
> >> Cheers,
> >>
> >> Gonzalo
> >>
> >> On 15/07/2013 3:52 AM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
> >>>
> >>> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts
> directories.
> >>>  This draft is a work item of the Peer-to-Peer Session Initiation Protocol
> >> Working Group of the IETF.
> >>>
> >>> 	Title           : An extension to RELOAD to support Relay Peer
> Routing
> >>> 	Author(s)       : Ning Zong
> >>>                           Xingfeng Jiang
> >>>                           Roni Even
> >>>                           Yunfei Zhang
> >>> 	Filename        : draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-08.txt
> >>> 	Pages           : 14
> >>> 	Date            : 2013-07-14
> >>>
> >>> Abstract:
> >>>    This document proposes an optional extension to RELOAD to support
> >>>    relay peer routing mode.  RELOAD recommends symmetric recursive
> >>>    routing for routing messages.  The new optional extension provides a
> >>>    shorter route for responses reducing the overhead on intermediate
> >>>    peers and describes the potential use cases where this extension can
> >>>    be used.
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> >>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr
> >>>
> >>> There's also a htmlized version available at:
> >>> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-08
> >>>
> >>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> >>> http://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-p2psip-rpr-08
> >>>
> >>>
> >>> Internet-Drafts are also available by anonymous FTP at:
> >>> ftp://ftp.ietf.org/internet-drafts/
> >>>
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