[Pals] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02: (with COMMENT)

"Barry Leiba" <barryleiba@computer.org> Mon, 19 October 2015 19:02 UTC

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Subject: [Pals] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02: (with COMMENT)

Barry Leiba has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Just total nit-level stuff here: unexpanded abbreviations that should be
expanded.  

-- Abstract --
PE, T-PE
(Because the abstract has to stand alone.)

-- Section 2.1 --
CE

-- Section 3.1 --
AC

-- Section 4 --
CC, VCCV

[Pals] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-p… Barry Leiba
Re: [Pals] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ie… Dongjie (Jimmy)