Re: [Pals] Barry Leiba's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02: (with COMMENT)

["Dongjie (Jimmy)" <[e-mail]>]

Hi Barry, 

Thanks for your review, in a new revision we will expand the acronyms on first use.

Best regards,
Jie

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> COMMENT:
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> Just total nit-level stuff here: unexpanded abbreviations that should be
> expanded.
> 
> -- Abstract --
> PE, T-PE
> (Because the abstract has to stand alone.)
> 
> -- Section 2.1 --
> CE
> 
> -- Section 3.1 --
> AC
> 
> -- Section 4 --
> CC, VCCV
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