Re: [Pals] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02: (with COMMENT)
"Dongjie (Jimmy)" <jie.dong@huawei.com> Tue, 20 October 2015 03:01 UTC
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From: "Dongjie (Jimmy)" <jie.dong@huawei.com>
To: Ben Campbell <ben@nostrum.com>, The IESG <iesg@ietf.org>
Thread-Topic: Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02: (with COMMENT)
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Subject: Re: [Pals] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Ben, Thanks for your comments, will fix the nits in a new revision. Best regards, Jie > -----Original Message----- > From: Ben Campbell [mailto:ben@nostrum.com] > Sent: Tuesday, October 20, 2015 7:02 AM > To: The IESG > Cc: draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe@ietf.org; > draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe.all@ietf.org; pals-chairs@ietf.org; > matthew.bocci@alcatel-lucent.com; pals@ietf.org > Subject: Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02: > (with COMMENT) > > Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for > draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02: No Objection > > When responding, please keep the subject line intact and reply to all email > addresses included in the To and CC lines. (Feel free to cut this introductory > paragraph, however.) > > > Please refer to https://www.ietf.org/iesg/statement/discuss-criteria.html > for more information about IESG DISCUSS and COMMENT positions. > > > The document, along with other ballot positions, can be found here: > https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe/ > > > > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > COMMENT: > ---------------------------------------------------------------------- > > Just some very minor nits: > > - section 1, 2nd paragraph: > > s/provide/providing > > - section 3 and subsections: > > Several occurrences of "Active Preferential Forwarding status bit" need a > leading "the". >
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