[Pals] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02: (with COMMENT)

"Ben Campbell" <ben@nostrum.com> Mon, 19 October 2015 23:02 UTC

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Subject: [Pals] Ben Campbell's No Objection on draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02: (with COMMENT)

Ben Campbell has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-pals-redundancy-spe-02: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Just some very minor nits:

- section 1, 2nd paragraph:

s/provide/providing

- section 3 and subsections:

Several occurrences of "Active Preferential Forwarding status bit" need a
leading "the".

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