Re: [paws] New PAWS draft uploaded

[Barry Leiba <[e-mail]>]

> I've uploaded a new draft of PAWS that I believe addresses all the points
> raised by the ADs, Gen-ART, and at the F2F.

Vince, thanks so much for the quick work on getting this done.
Essentially all my points have been addressed.  I have this ready to
post as a non-blocking, minor comment whenever Pete creates a ballot
for the document:

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A small point in the header:
"iconectiv (formerly Telcordia Interconnection Solutions)"
I think it's fine to put that in the "Authors' Addresses" section, but
the header should just say "iconectiv".  I realize that takes a little
inconvenient massaging of the XML, and probably isn't worth the
trouble for the I-D.  Might just put that in an RFC Editor note....

-- Section 2.2 --
As a very minor thing, I suggest this (adding URIs for the agencies,
and specifying "U.S." for FCC):

OLD
   ETSI:  European Telecommunications Standards Institute
   FCC:  Federal Communications Commission
NEW
   ETSI:  European Telecommunications Standards Institute
         <http://etsi.org>
   FCC:  The U.S. Federal Communications Commission
         <http://fcc.gov>
END

-- Section 6 --
As I had concerns in version -12 with the use of JSON schema language
that hasn't been fully specified and is in an expired I-D, I should
explicitly say that I'm happy with what Section 6 and its subsections
look like in version -13.  Thanks for the fix!
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Barry