Re: [Pce] Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-ipv6-22: (with COMMENT)

Cheng Li <c.l@huawei.com> Tue, 02 April 2024 18:40 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Pce] Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-ipv6-22: (with COMMENT)
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Thank you Dhruv for proposing the text, and Jim for your comments.

We have updated the draft accordingly, please see the update below.

Thanks,
Cheng



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Subject: Re: [Pce] Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-ipv6-22: (with COMMENT)

Thanks Dhruv that certainly reads better.

Jim

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Subject: Re: [Pce] Jim Guichard's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-ipv6-22: (with COMMENT)

Hi Jim,

On Mon, Apr 1, 2024 at 6:06 PM Jim Guichard via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org<mailto:noreply@ietf.org>> wrote:
Jim Guichard has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-ipv6-22: No Objection

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Thank you for a well written document. Minor nit:

Section 3.1 - 2nd Paragraph. Please review this paragraph as it seems to say
that the MPLS mechanisms remain unchanged, but the text is difficult to parse.
Please make the meaning clear.

Yes, I can see that. The text aimed to clarify that in the case IPv6 is used (instead of IPv4) for SR-MPLS, the PCEP procedures are as per RFC 8664 and not this document.

How is this change ->

OLD:

   For the use of an IPv6 control plane but an MPLS data plane,

   mechanism remains the same as specified in [RFC8664].



   This document describes the extension to support SRv6 in PCEP.

NEW:

   When SR-MPLS is used with an IPv6 network, the PCEP procedures and

   mechanisms are as specified in [RFC8664].

   When SR leverages the IPv6 forwarding plane (i.e. SRv6), the PCEP

   procedures and mechanisms are extended in this document.
END

Thanks!
Dhruv




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