[Pce] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional
Dhruv Dhody <dd@dhruvdhody.com> Tue, 09 April 2024 17:22 UTC
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Subject: [Pce] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional
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Hi Authors, I have completed my shepherd review. I have gone ahead and made some minor edits directly in the XML source. Please verify them and if acceptable, go ahead and post a new version. Once the new version is posted, we will ship it to the IESG. I have also made RFC 8253 and RFC 8281 as Normative references. Diff: https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-08&url_2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/dhruvdhody/ietf/master/draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-09.txt XML for -09: https://github.com/dhruvdhody/ietf/blob/master/draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-09.xml Shepherd Report: https://notes.ietf.org/iL9ZlJF-TaGgYVYU0mXrwg?view Thanks! Dhruv