Re: [Pce] Shepherd review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional

Cheng Li <c.l@huawei.com> Tue, 16 April 2024 10:04 UTC

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To: Dhruv Dhody <dd@dhruvdhody.com>
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Thank you Dhruv, the update looks good to me. We have updated the draft already!



https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional/



There is also an HTMLized version available at:

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-09



A diff from the previous version is available at:

https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-09

Respect,
Cheng


From: Dhruv Dhody <dd@dhruvdhody.com>
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To: Cheng Li <c.l@huawei.com>
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Subject: Shepherd review of draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional

Hi Authors,

I have completed my shepherd review. I have gone ahead and made some minor edits directly in the XML source. Please verify them and if acceptable, go ahead and post a new version. Once the new version is posted, we will ship it to the IESG.

I have also made RFC 8253 and RFC 8281 as Normative references.

Diff: https://author-tools.ietf.org/diff?doc_1=draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-08&url_2=https://raw.githubusercontent.com/dhruvdhody/ietf/master/draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-09.txt
XML for -09: https://github.com/dhruvdhody/ietf/blob/master/draft-ietf-pce-stateful-pce-optional-09.xml
Shepherd Report: https://notes.ietf.org/iL9ZlJF-TaGgYVYU0mXrwg?view

Thanks!
Dhruv