[Pce] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-29

Sheng Jiang via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Tue, 30 January 2024 14:55 UTC

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Subject: [Pce] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-29

Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review result: Has Nits

I have reviewed this document as part of the OPS directorate's ongoing
effort to review all IETF documents being processed by the IESG. Comments that
are not addressed in last call may be included in AD reviews during the IESG
review. Document editors and WG chairs should treat these comments just like
any other last call comments.

Document: draft-ietf-pce-pcep-extension-native-ip-29
Reviewer: Sheng Jiang
Review Date: 2024-01-30
Result: Has Nits

This Standards Track document defines the Path Computation Element Communication
Protocol (PCEP) extension for Central Control Dynamic Routing (CCDR) based 
applications in Native IP networks.

114: requireHs --> requires
127: nexthops --> next hops
464: lead --> leads
618: nexthop --> next hop 
702: soley --> solely 
845: multihop --> multi-hop 

There are many places that the "s" after the third person singular verbs are missing.

[Pce] Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-pce-pcep-… Sheng Jiang via Datatracker
[Pce] 答复: Opsdir early review of draft-ietf-pce-p… Aijun Wang