Re: [Pce] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13

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From: "Andrew Stone (Nokia)" <andrew.stone@nokia.com>
To: "julien.meuric@orange.com" <julien.meuric@orange.com>, "pce@ietf.org" <pce@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Pce] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13
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I've also read the new version and -02 content is more streamlined and looks good to me. 

+1 for proceeding on WGLC

Thanks
Andrew




On 2023-11-16, 9:14 AM, "Pce on behalf of Adrian Farrel" <pce-bounces@ietf.org <mailto:pce-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of adrian@olddog.co.uk <mailto:adrian@olddog.co.uk>> wrote:

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Hi,

I've read the new version of this draft.

I think it is ready for publication, but you have used smart quotes for
the apostrophes in the Abstract and Introduction.

Thanks for all the work.
Adrian


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Subject: [Pce] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13


Dear PCE WG,


As suggested by Sean during the WG meeting today, this message starts a
2nd WG last call on draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-02 [1]. Please, express
any comments you have about the latest revision of this document (diff
in [2]) using the PCE mailing list..


This WGLC will end on Friday 24th November 2023.


Thanks,


Julien


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[1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13/ <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13/>
[2]
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-01&url2 <https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-01&amp;url2>
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