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Re: [Pce] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13

Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk> Thu, 16 November 2023 14:14 UTC

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From: Adrian Farrel <adrian@olddog.co.uk>
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Subject: Re: [Pce] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13
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Hi,

I've read the new version of this draft.

I think it is ready for publication, but you have used smart quotes for
the apostrophes in the Abstract and Introduction.

Thanks for all the work.

Adrian

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From: Pce <pce-bounces@ietf.org> On Behalf Of julien.meuric@orange.com
Sent: 09 November 2023 17:13
To: pce@ietf.org
Subject: [Pce] 2nd WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13

Dear PCE WG,

As suggested by Sean during the WG meeting today, this message starts a 
2nd WG last call on draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-02 [1]. Please, express 
any comments you have about the latest revision of this document (diff 
in [2]) using the PCE mailing list..

This WGLC will end on Friday 24th November 2023.

Thanks,

Julien

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[1] https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13/
[2] 
https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url1=draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-01&url2
=draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-02&difftype=--html

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