Re: [Pce] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-03: (with COMMENT)

Dhruv Dhody <dd@dhruvdhody.com> Tue, 02 January 2024 13:59 UTC

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Date: Tue, 02 Jan 2024 19:28:40 +0530
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Subject: Re: [Pce] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-03: (with COMMENT)
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Hi Èric,

Happy 2024!

On Tue, Jan 2, 2024 at 6:03 PM Éric Vyncke via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org>
wrote:

> Éric Vyncke has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-03: No Objection
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> # Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-05
>
> Thank you for the work put into this document. It was an easy and simple
> read
> for my first document review in 2024!
>
> Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be
> appreciated even if only for my own education).
>
> Special thanks to Andrew Stone for the shepherd's detailed write-up
> including
> the WG consensus and the justification of the intended status.
>
> I hope that this review helps to improve the document,
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> Regards,
>
> -éric
>
> # COMMENTS (non-blocking)
>
> ## Section 1
>
> Is it a `Editor's Note:` or a "Note to the IESG" or a "Note to the RFC
> Editor" ?
>

Dhruv: It was an Editor's note while we were working on the I-D. At this
stage perhaps we can just remove the note now and stick it out with the
fate of RFC8446bis (which is in the post-WGLC stage). Sean and Russ should
chime in if they disagree :)




>
> ## Section 3
>
> `MUST prefer to negotiate the latest version` is of course the preferred
> behavior for the initiator, but should the document clearly specify that
> the
> responser "MUST select the latest version" ? (please bear with me as
> English is
> not my primary language).
>

Dhruv: FWIW I see the phrase usage in RFC 9325 as well as in the netconf
tls 1.3 I-D which was in a recent IESG telechat! ¯\_(ツ)_/¯


> ## Section 6
>
> I wonder about the usefulness of an implementation section having `there
> are no
> known implementations of this mechanism.`
>
>
>
>
Dhruv: PCE WG set out an Implementation Section Policy listed at
https://wiki.ietf.org/group/pce/ImplementationPolicy
We wanted the WG and the IETF community to be aware of known
implementations (or lack thereof) at the time of approval, at publication
the section is anyway removed.

Thanks!
Dhruv