[Pce] Éric Vyncke's No Objection on draft-ietf-pce-pceps-tls13-03: (with COMMENT)

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# Éric Vyncke, INT AD, comments for draft-ietf-avtcore-rtp-scip-05

Thank you for the work put into this document. It was an easy and simple read
for my first document review in 2024!

Please find below some non-blocking COMMENT points (but replies would be
appreciated even if only for my own education).

Special thanks to Andrew Stone for the shepherd's detailed write-up including
the WG consensus and the justification of the intended status.

I hope that this review helps to improve the document,

Regards,

-éric

# COMMENTS (non-blocking)

## Section 1

Is it a `Editor's Note:` or a "Note to the IESG" or a "Note to the RFC Editor" ?

## Section 3

`MUST prefer to negotiate the latest version` is of course the preferred
behavior for the initiator, but should the document clearly specify that the
responser "MUST select the latest version" ? (please bear with me as English is
not my primary language).

## Section 6

I wonder about the usefulness of an implementation section having `there are no
known implementations of this mechanism.`