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From: "Andrew Stone (Nokia)" <andrew.stone@nokia.com>
To: Dhruv Dhody <dd@dhruvdhody.com>, "pce@ietf.org" <pce@ietf.org>
CC: pce-chairs <pce-chairs@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp@ietf.org>
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Subject: Re: [Pce] WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-12
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Hi PCE WG, Authors,

I’ve read the latest version and it was a straight forward read and looks to be in good shape. In addition, comments I had during original adoption were also all addressed. I support progression of the document. Some minor comments/feedback below.

Thanks
Andrew



- Terminology section adjustment:

ORIGINAL
"Can refer to the PCEP object or to the group of LSPs that belong to the Association. This should be clear from the context.""

NEW
"Depending on discussion context, it refers to a PCEP object or to a group of LSPs that belong to the Association"



- At first I wondered why 'should' instead of must in the below text and wondered when would this occur. Realized PCC could determine destination from the ERO and occur with PcInit. Perhaps worth giving an example scenario?

ORIGINAL
"... PCEP speaker SHOULD extract the destination from the Endpoint field in the SRPA Extended Association ID TLV"

NEW
"... PCEP speaker SHOULD extract the destination from the Endpoint field in the SRPA Extended Association ID TLV. For example, a PcInit message does not carry LSP-IDENTIFIERS and may not carry an END-POINTS object[RFC8281], therefore PCC SHOULD use the destination from the Endpoint field. "



From: Dhruv Dhody <dd@dhruvdhody.com>
Date: Monday, January 8, 2024 at 5:29 AM
To: "pce@ietf.org" <pce@ietf.org>
Cc: pce-chairs <pce-chairs@ietf.org>, "draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp@ietf.org" <draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp@ietf.org>
Subject: WGLC for draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-12
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Hi WG,

This email starts a 2-weeks working group last call for draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp-12.

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-segment-routing-policy-cp/

Please indicate your support or concern for this draft. If you are opposed to the progression of the draft to RFC, please articulate your concern. If you support it, please indicate that you have read the latest version and it is ready for publication in your opinion. As always, review comments and nits are most welcome.

The WG LC will end on Monday 22nd January 2024.

A general reminder to the WG to be more vocal during the last-call/adoption.

Thanks,
Dhruv & Julien

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