Re: [Pce] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-07.txt

Dhruv Dhody <dhruv.ietf@gmail.com> Thu, 06 December 2018 14:20 UTC

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Subject: Re: [Pce] New Version Notification for draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-07.txt
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Hi Daniel,

Thanks for handling my comments, BTW page numbers are missing in the
table of contents.
Intrestingly that does not show up in id-nits [1] or mentioned in RFC
style guide [2], but anyways page numbers in ToC are useful :)

Hi Adrian,

Are you happy with the resolution of your comments?

Thanks!
Dhruv

[1] https://www.ietf.org/tools/idnits?url=https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-07.txt
[2] https://tools.ietf.org/html/rfc7322#section-4.7
On Thu, Dec 6, 2018 at 1:25 AM <daniel@olddog.co.uk> wrote:
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> Dear PCE'rs,
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> Please find a new version of draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions (07) addressing comments from the most excellent Dhruv, our Document Shepherd.
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> BR, Dan.
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> To: Oscar de Dios <ogondio@tid.es>; Daniel King <daniel@olddog.co.uk>; Fatai Zhang <zhangfatai@huawei.com>; Oscar Gonzalez de Dios <ogondio@tid.es>; Quintin Zhao <quintin.zhao@huawei.com>; Ramon Casellas <ramon.casellas@cttc.es>
> Subject: New Version Notification for draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-07.txt
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> A new version of I-D, draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-07.txt
> has been successfully submitted by Daniel King and posted to the
> IETF repository.
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> Name:           draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions
> Revision:       07
> Title:          Extensions to Path Computation Element Communication Protocol (PCEP) for Hierarchical Path Computation Elements (PCE)
> Document date:  2018-12-05
> Group:          pce
> Pages:          27
> URL:            https://www.ietf.org/internet-drafts/draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-07.txt
> Status:         https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions/
> Htmlized:       https://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-07
> Htmlized:       https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions
> Diff:           https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pce-hierarchy-extensions-07
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> Abstract:
>    The Hierarchical Path Computation Element (H-PCE) architecture is
>    defined in RFC 6805.  It provides a mechanism to derive an optimum
>    end-to-end path in a multi-domain environment by using a hierarchical
>    relationship between domains to select the optimum sequence of
>    domains and optimum paths across those domains.
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>    This document defines extensions to the Path Computation Element
>    Protocol (PCEP) to support Hierarchical PCE procedures.
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