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Subject: Re: [pim] Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-08.txt
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On 18/11/2022 09:27, tom petch wrote:

Looks good

I think that I still see some double line spacing, fixed in Security and 
IANA but present perhaps in the YANG module editor list and in s.1.1.

Not worth another version IMHO(until something else crops up:-).

Tom Petch


> From: I-D-Announce <i-d-announce-bounces@ietf.org> on behalf of internet-drafts@ietf.org <internet-drafts@ietf.org>
> Sent: 17 November 2022 06:57
> To: i-d-announce@ietf.org
> Cc: pim@ietf.org
> Subject: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-08.txt
>
>
> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Protocols for IP Multicast WG of the IETF.
>
>          Title           : A Yang Data Model for IGMP/MLD Proxy
>          Authors         : Hongji Zhao
>                            Xufeng Liu
>                            Yisong Liu
>                            Mani Panchanathan
>                            Mahesh Sivakumar
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-08.txt
>    Pages           : 22
>    Date            : 2022-11-16
>
> Abstract:
>     This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to
> configure and manage Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) or
> Multicast Listener Discovery (MLD) proxy devices. The YANG module in
> this document conforms to Network Management Datastore Architecture
> (NMDA).
>
>
> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang/
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> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-08
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> https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-08
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