Re: [pim] Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-08.txt

[Hongji Zhao <[e-mail]>]

Hi Tom,

Thanks a lot for your review.

It seems difficult to control the line spacing with Word. Next step the RFC editor will make an XML file for this document and resolve the problems about formats.

BR/Hongji

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From: tom petch <[e-mail]> 
Sent: 2022年11月19日 1:11
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Subject: Re: Fw: I-D Action: draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-08.txt

On 18/11/2022 09:27, tom petch wrote:

Looks good

I think that I still see some double line spacing, fixed in Security and IANA but present perhaps in the YANG module editor list and in s.1.1.

Not worth another version IMHO(until something else crops up:-).

Tom Petch


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> A New Internet-Draft is available from the on-line Internet-Drafts directories.
> This draft is a work item of the Protocols for IP Multicast WG of the IETF.
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>          Title           : A Yang Data Model for IGMP/MLD Proxy
>          Authors         : Hongji Zhao
>                            Xufeng Liu
>                            Yisong Liu
>                            Mani Panchanathan
>                            Mahesh Sivakumar
>    Filename        : draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang-08.txt
>    Pages           : 22
>    Date            : 2022-11-16
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> Abstract:
>     This document defines a YANG data model that can be used to 
> configure and manage Internet Group Management Protocol (IGMP) or 
> Multicast Listener Discovery (MLD) proxy devices. The YANG module in 
> this document conforms to Network Management Datastore Architecture 
> (NMDA).
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> The IETF datatracker status page for this draft is:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-yang/
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> There is also an htmlized version available at:
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/html/draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-proxy-ya
> ng-08
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