[pim] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-extension-06: (with COMMENT)

Lars Eggert via Datatracker <noreply@ietf.org> Thu, 03 February 2022 10:10 UTC

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Subject: [pim] Lars Eggert's No Objection on draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-extension-06: (with COMMENT)

Lars Eggert has entered the following ballot position for
draft-ietf-pim-igmp-mld-extension-06: No Objection

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COMMENT:
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Thanks to Pete Resnick for their General Area Review Team (Gen-ART) review
(https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/gen-art/ZaFgT1o9GT23_P4KfhXWmFiTFxI).

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Section 3.4. , paragraph 3, nit:
> n mechanism is expected to be slow. Also as new extensions are defined, it ma
>                                     ^^^^
A comma may be missing after the conjunctive/linking adverb "Also".

Section 4. , paragraph 5, nit:
> chanism only for IGMPv3 and MLDv2. Hence this mechanism does not apply if ho
>                                    ^^^^^
A comma may be missing after the conjunctive/linking adverb "Hence".

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