Re: [precis] Adam Roach's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-7613bis-08: (with COMMENT)

Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im> Thu, 06 July 2017 00:32 UTC

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From: Peter Saint-Andre <stpeter@stpeter.im>
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Subject: Re: [precis] Adam Roach's Yes on draft-ietf-precis-7613bis-08: (with COMMENT)
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On 7/5/17 4:58 PM, Adam Roach wrote:
> Adam Roach has entered the following ballot position for
> draft-ietf-precis-7613bis-08: Yes
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> COMMENT:
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> Nit: The final paragraph of section 1 is missing a paren after "[RFC7622]".
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> Nit: Step 2 in section 4.2.2 cites RFC 4013 as text rather than the normal
> citation format of [RFC4013]
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> I have the same comment as I did on rfc7700bis regarding the implications of
> operation idempotence.

Acknowledged.

Peter