[quicwg/base-drafts] 7864bd: Rewording suggestions

Martin Thomson <noreply@github.com> Wed, 11 December 2019 03:41 UTC

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Subject: [quicwg/base-drafts] 7864bd: Rewording suggestions
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  Branch: refs/heads/close-small-initial
  Home:   https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts
  Commit: 7864bda6e4dd98d9e033ce49be4350d849b7f361
      https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/commit/7864bda6e4dd98d9e033ce49be4350d849b7f361
  Author: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
  Date:   2019-12-11 (Wed, 11 Dec 2019)

  Changed paths:
    M draft-ietf-quic-transport.md

  Log Message:
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  Rewording suggestions

Co-Authored-By: Jana Iyengar <jri.ietf@gmail.com>