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Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Minor editorial fix (#3710)

Martin Thomson <notifications@github.com> Thu, 04 June 2020 05:02 UTC

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There don't appear to be too many to fix up:

```
$ egrep -n 'Section [4-9](\.[0-9]*)? of {{QUIC-REC' *.md
draft-ietf-quic-transport.md:1828:(PTO, see Section 5.3 of {{QUIC-RECOVERY}}). Specifically, the client MUST send
draft-ietf-quic-transport.md:2396:This timer SHOULD be set as described in Section 5.3 of {{QUIC-RECOVERY}} and
draft-ietf-quic-transport.md:2670:time out soon, such as within a PTO; see Section 6.6 of {{QUIC-RECOVERY}}.
draft-ietf-quic-transport.md:3445:Section 6 of {{QUIC-RECOVERY}}, rely on acknowledgments to manage their
draft-ietf-quic-transport.md:4380:control state; see Section 6.5 of {{QUIC-RECOVERY}}.
```

This seems to cover it.

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