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[quicwg/base-drafts] QPACK [editorial] Update text on wire instructions. (#2938)

Bence Béky <notifications@github.com> Wed, 31 July 2019 15:59 UTC

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* Use more uniform language in description of instructions: "begin" instead of "start" everywhere (arbitrarily, but make it consistent); "follows" instead of "includes" or implicit mention of a field.
* Prefer internal references to external ones, also elsewhere.
* Prefer "instruction" to "representation" in low-level contexts focusing on wire format, but not in higher-level contexts.
* Avoid undefined term "header block representation" when it is used to mean "header block".
* Explicitly allow a header block to not have any instructions after the mandatory prefix.
* Refer to Literal Header Field With Name Reference section in Literal Header Field Without Name Reference instead of verbatim repeating text on 'N' bit.

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  https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2938

-- Commit Summary --

  * instructions

-- File Changes --

    M draft-ietf-quic-qpack.md (175)

-- Patch Links --

https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2938.patch
https://github.com/quicwg/base-drafts/pull/2938.diff

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