Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Adjust pointers to sections (#3494)

ianswett <notifications@github.com> Tue, 03 March 2020 21:12 UTC

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> @@ -946,13 +946,14 @@ latest_rtt:
 
 smoothed_rtt:
 : The smoothed RTT of the connection, computed as described in
-  {{?RFC6298}}
+  Section {{smoothed-rtt}}

```suggestion
  Section {{smoothed-rtt}}.
```

>  
 rttvar:
-: The RTT variation, computed as described in {{?RFC6298}}
+: The RTT variation, computed as described in Section {{smoothed-rtt}}

```suggestion
: The RTT variation, computed as described in Section {{smoothed-rtt}}.
```

>  
 min_rtt:
-: The minimum RTT seen in the connection, ignoring ack delay.
+: The minimum RTT seen in the connection, ignoring ack delay, as described
+  in Section {{min-rtt}}

```suggestion
  in Section {{min-rtt}}.
```

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