Re: [quicwg/base-drafts] Allow ClientHello to span multiple QUIC packets (#3045)

[Martin Thomson <[e-mail]>]

martinthomson approved this pull request.

Some residual singular/plural disagreements.

>  
-Note that if the server sends a HelloRetryRequest, the client will send a second
+Note that if the server sends a HelloRetryRequest, the client will send another
 Initial packet.  This Initial packet will continue the cryptographic handshake

```suggestion
series of Initial packets.  These Initial packets will continue the cryptographic handshake
```

>  
-Note that if the server sends a HelloRetryRequest, the client will send a second
+Note that if the server sends a HelloRetryRequest, the client will send another
 Initial packet.  This Initial packet will continue the cryptographic handshake
 and will contain a CRYPTO frame with an offset matching the size of the CRYPTO

```suggestion
and will contain CRYPTO frames starting at an offset matching the size of the CRYPTO
```

>  Initial packet.  This Initial packet will continue the cryptographic handshake
 and will contain a CRYPTO frame with an offset matching the size of the CRYPTO
-frame sent in the first Initial packet.  Cryptographic handshake messages
-subsequent to the first do not need to fit within a single UDP datagram.
+frame sent in the first Initial packet.

```suggestion
frames sent in the first flight of Initial packets.
```

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