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Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-quic-ack-frequency-04.txt

Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net> Mon, 27 March 2023 04:59 UTC

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Date: Mon, 27 Mar 2023 13:58:35 +0900
From: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>
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Subject: Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-quic-ack-frequency-04.txt
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> A diff from the previous version is available at:
> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-quic-ack-frequency-04

Two comments:

Do you really need to change the code point when nothing substantive changes in this revision?

The examples in Section 6.1.1 seem to have had their formatting tweaked slightly in this revision, but they are still very unclear.

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