Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-quic-ack-frequency-04.txt

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From: Mirja Kuehlewind <mirja.kuehlewind@ericsson.com>
To: Martin Thomson <mt@lowentropy.net>, "quic@ietf.org" <quic@ietf.org>
Subject: Re: I-D Action: draft-ietf-quic-ack-frequency-04.txt
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Date: Mon, 27 Mar 2023 05:01:59 +0000
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Hi Martin,

we pushed a new version because we forgot to change it in the last version.

Mirja



On 27.03.23, 06:59, "QUIC on behalf of Martin Thomson" <quic-bounces@ietf.org on behalf of mt@lowentropy.net> wrote:

    > A diff from the previous version is available at:
    > https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-quic-ack-frequency-04

    Two comments:

    Do you really need to change the code point when nothing substantive changes in this revision?

    The examples in Section 6.1.1 seem to have had their formatting tweaked slightly in this revision, but they are still very unclear.