Genart telechat review of draft-ietf-quic-transport-33

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Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review result: Ready

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Document: draft-ietf-quic-transport-33
Reviewer: Stewart Bryant
Review Date: 2021-01-04
IETF LC End Date: 2020-11-16
IESG Telechat date: 2021-01-07

This is a very clever, well written and innovative body of work, and is ready
to be published.

Given the huge number of people that will need to be conversant with this, I
think it would be useful if a document akin to a tutorial were published by the
WG to help those with less specialist interest better understand the principles
of operation. Normally such material would be included in the base text, but I
understand the concern that this already a large document.

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