Re: [QUIC] Early Editorial Review Comment draft-hamilton-quic-transport-protocol-01
Jana Iyengar <jri@google.com> Mon, 07 November 2016 18:04 UTC
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From: Jana Iyengar <jri@google.com>
Date: Mon, 07 Nov 2016 10:04:21 -0800
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Subject: Re: [QUIC] Early Editorial Review Comment draft-hamilton-quic-transport-protocol-01
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Thanks much for the review, Patrick! I'm leaving out most editorial comments, with the intention of addressing them after adoption. A couple of responses in the meanwhile though: 0] *There is really very little talk about addressing.* In TCP, this was > obvious - the 5 tuple identifies the connection and binds the addressing > into the transport. Not much to say. But quic awesomely separates the > connection identifier without really talking about how addressing has to > work. There is a TODO about rebinding that is obviously part of this > (github issue!), but even the original binding is underspecified (e.g. > where is the server side of the client handshake addressed to?). Its also > not clear how the STK applies to this, and that goes into security > considerations etc, etc.. There are some intuitive answers to these > questions, but we ought to document. > Good point. I've been thinking about perhaps separate out a discussion of the Connection ID, since I also expect there to be discussion around the current design of it being entirely client-chosen. Use of connection ID is currently in various parts of the doc, but given its novelty, I wonder if a separate "QUIC Addressing" overview section makes sense, which would point to the various places in the doc that consider addressing. FWIW, the STK records the IP address, since it's a proof of IP ownership, similar to the TFO cookie. Using the connection ID is largely useless here, since the STK is meant to be it for a new connection (with a new connection ID.) > 1] *Draft Intended Status is listed as experimenta*l. What's up with > that? Standards Track I would hope, or I'm going home now :) > :-) I don't think this matters, since the status should change with adoption. - jana
- [QUIC] Early Editorial Review Comment draft-hamil… Patrick McManus
- Re: [QUIC] Early Editorial Review Comment draft-h… Jana Iyengar