Re: [radext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-radext-tls-psk-09.txt

Jan-Frederik Rieckers <rieckers@dfn.de> Fri, 01 March 2024 10:10 UTC

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Subject: Re: [radext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-radext-tls-psk-09.txt
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Just to keep it at the back of the head for a new revision (if 
necessary) or AUTH48, should there be no new revision:

"There are no known, use-cases" -> the comma is a relic from "few, if any,"

The comma should be removed.

Cheers,
Janfred

On 29.02.24 21:56, Alan DeKok wrote:
>    In the interest of getting one more document out of the way quickly, here's the next revision.
> 
>    The hope is that there is now bandwidth to review / finish TLSbis.
> 
>> On Feb 29, 2024, at 3:55 PM, internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
>>
>> Internet-Draft draft-ietf-radext-tls-psk-09.txt is now available. It is a work
>> item of the RADIUS EXTensions (RADEXT) WG of the IETF.
>>
>>    Title:   RADIUS and TLS-PSK
>>    Author:  Alan DeKok
>>    Name:    draft-ietf-radext-tls-psk-09.txt
>>    Pages:   20
>>    Dates:   2024-02-29
>>
>> Abstract:
>>
>>    This document gives implementation and operational considerations for
>>    using TLS-PSK with RADIUS/TLS (RFC6614) and RADIUS/DTLS (RFC7360).
>>    The purpose of the document is to help smooth the operational
>>    transition from the use of the insecure RADIUS/UDP to the use of the
>>    much more secure RADIUS/TLS.
>>
>> The IETF datatracker status page for this Internet-Draft is:
>> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-radext-tls-psk/
>>
>> There is also an HTML version available at:
>> https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-radext-tls-psk-09.html
>>
>> A diff from the previous version is available at:
>> https://author-tools.ietf.org/iddiff?url2=draft-ietf-radext-tls-psk-09
>>
>> Internet-Drafts are also available by rsync at:
>> rsync.ietf.org::internet-drafts
>>
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