Re: [radext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-radext-tls-psk-09.txt

Alan DeKok <aland@deployingradius.com> Sun, 03 March 2024 15:40 UTC

Return-Path: <aland@deployingradius.com>
X-Original-To: radext@ietfa.amsl.com
Delivered-To: radext@ietfa.amsl.com
Received: from localhost (localhost [127.0.0.1]) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTP id 0C3C3C14F60B for <radext@ietfa.amsl.com>; Sun, 3 Mar 2024 07:40:05 -0800 (PST)
X-Virus-Scanned: amavisd-new at amsl.com
X-Spam-Flag: NO
X-Spam-Score: -1.909
X-Spam-Level:
X-Spam-Status: No, score=-1.909 tagged_above=-999 required=5 tests=[BAYES_00=-1.9, RCVD_IN_ZEN_BLOCKED_OPENDNS=0.001, SPF_HELO_NONE=0.001, SPF_PASS=-0.001, T_SCC_BODY_TEXT_LINE=-0.01] autolearn=ham autolearn_force=no
Received: from mail.ietf.org ([50.223.129.194]) by localhost (ietfa.amsl.com [127.0.0.1]) (amavisd-new, port 10024) with ESMTP id O1IT2mlUS_lU for <radext@ietfa.amsl.com>; Sun, 3 Mar 2024 07:40:03 -0800 (PST)
Received: from mail.networkradius.com (mail.networkradius.com [62.210.147.122]) (using TLSv1.3 with cipher TLS_AES_256_GCM_SHA384 (256/256 bits) key-exchange X25519 server-signature RSA-PSS (2048 bits) server-digest SHA256) (No client certificate requested) by ietfa.amsl.com (Postfix) with ESMTPS id 9E577C14F5E0 for <radext@ietf.org>; Sun, 3 Mar 2024 07:40:03 -0800 (PST)
Received: from smtpclient.apple (135-23-95-173.cpe.pppoe.ca [135.23.95.173]) by mail.networkradius.com (Postfix) with ESMTPSA id 10345560; Sun, 3 Mar 2024 15:39:59 +0000 (UTC)
Authentication-Results: NetworkRADIUS; dmarc=none (p=none dis=none) header.from=deployingradius.com
Content-Type: text/plain; charset="us-ascii"
Mime-Version: 1.0 (Mac OS X Mail 16.0 \(3696.120.41.1.1\))
From: Alan DeKok <aland@deployingradius.com>
In-Reply-To: <28783975-c299-4767-920f-bb24be7ea0ba@dfn.de>
Date: Sun, 03 Mar 2024 10:39:58 -0500
Cc: radext@ietf.org
Content-Transfer-Encoding: quoted-printable
Message-Id: <DAF23AF9-0275-4EC4-BB80-31274511B29D@deployingradius.com>
References: <170924015107.22977.7815953177776863383@ietfa.amsl.com> <402EB4DA-AD30-4DBD-8A37-58BDECC14850@deployingradius.com> <28783975-c299-4767-920f-bb24be7ea0ba@dfn.de>
To: Jan-Frederik Rieckers <rieckers@dfn.de>
X-Mailer: Apple Mail (2.3696.120.41.1.1)
Archived-At: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/radext/xZEyuOxbOxW3VGfxQ5pTUFdgD20>
Subject: Re: [radext] I-D Action: draft-ietf-radext-tls-psk-09.txt
X-BeenThere: radext@ietf.org
X-Mailman-Version: 2.1.39
Precedence: list
List-Id: RADIUS EXTensions working group discussion list <radext.ietf.org>
List-Unsubscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/options/radext>, <mailto:radext-request@ietf.org?subject=unsubscribe>
List-Archive: <https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/browse/radext/>
List-Post: <mailto:radext@ietf.org>
List-Help: <mailto:radext-request@ietf.org?subject=help>
List-Subscribe: <https://www.ietf.org/mailman/listinfo/radext>, <mailto:radext-request@ietf.org?subject=subscribe>
X-List-Received-Date: Sun, 03 Mar 2024 15:40:05 -0000

On Mar 1, 2024, at 5:10 AM, Jan-Frederik Rieckers <rieckers@dfn.de> wrote:
> 
> Just to keep it at the back of the head for a new revision (if necessary) or AUTH48, should there be no new revision:
> 
> "There are no known, use-cases" -> the comma is a relic from "few, if any,"
> 
> The comma should be removed.

  Thanks.  I'll make that change, and issue a new document after further review.

  Alan DeKok.