Issue: Cmts on 2618-21bis MIBs
"Greg Weber \(gdweber\)" <gdweber@cisco.com> Thu, 10 November 2005 02:17 UTC
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Subject: Issue: Cmts on 2618-21bis MIBs
Date: Wed, 09 Nov 2005 21:17:45 -0500
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Thread-Topic: Issue: Cmts on 2618-21bis MIBs
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From: "Greg Weber (gdweber)" <gdweber@cisco.com>
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Description of issue: Minor editorial cmts Submitter name: Greg Weber Submitter email address: gdweber@cisco.com Date first submitted: November 9th, 2005 Reference: N/A Document: draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-01.txt draft-ietf-radext-rfc2619bis-01.txt draft-ietf-radext-rfc2620bis-01.txt draft-ietf-radext-rfc2621bis-01.txt Comment type: 'E' Editorial Priority: '2' May fix Section: See below Rationale/Explanation of issue: Typos Length description of problem: I reread the docs. They look fine to me with the exception of the typos mentioned below (some of which Alan has already mentioned). Requested changes: draft-ietf-radext-rfc2618bis-01.txt p10, radiusAuthClientPendingRequests: Acess -> Access p12, radiusAuthServerInetAddress: adddess -> address p14, radiusAuthClientExtPendingRequests: Acess -> Access p17, Section 9: MAX-\nACCESS -> MAX-ACCESS (See Section 2.1, #3 of http://www.ietf.org/ID-Checklist.html) p18, Section 9: IPSec -> IPsec draft-ietf-radext-rfc2619bis-01.txt p14, radiusAuthClientInetAddress: adddess -> address p19, Section 9: MAX-\nACCESS -> MAX-ACCESS p19, Section 9: IPSec -> IPsec draft-ietf-radext-rfc2620bis-01.txt p11, radiusAccServerInetAddress: adddess -> address p16, Section 9: MAX-\nACCESS -> MAX-ACCESS p17, Section 9: IPSec -> IPsec draft-ietf-radext-rfc2621bis-01.txt p13, radiusAccClientInetAddress: adddess -> address p18, Section 9: MAX-\nACCESS -> MAX-ACCESS p18, Section 9: IPSec -> IPsec -- to unsubscribe send a message to radiusext-request@ops.ietf.org with the word 'unsubscribe' in a single line as the message text body. archive: <http://psg.com/lists/radiusext/>
- Issue: Cmts on 2618-21bis MIBs Greg Weber (gdweber)