Issue: Cmts on 3576 MIBs

"Greg Weber \(gdweber\)" <gdweber@cisco.com> Thu, 10 November 2005 02:24 UTC

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Subject: Issue: Cmts on 3576 MIBs
Date: Wed, 09 Nov 2005 21:24:10 -0500
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Thread-Topic: Issue: Cmts on 3576 MIBs
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From: "Greg Weber (gdweber)" <gdweber@cisco.com>
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Description of issue: Minor editorial cmts
Submitter name: Greg Weber
Submitter email address: gdweber@cisco.com
Date first submitted: November 9th, 2005
Reference: N/A
Document: 
  draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-02.txt
  draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-02.txt
Comment type: 'E' Editorial
Priority: '2' May fix
Section: See below
Rationale/Explanation of issue: Typos
Length description of problem: 
  I reread the docs.  They look fine to me with the exception of the
  typos mentioned below.
Requested changes:

draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-server-mib-02.txt
  p7, radiusDynAuthServerMIB:
    Remote Access Dialin User Service -> 
    Remote Authentication Dial In User Service
  p11, radiusDynAuthServDisconAuthOnlyRequests: 
    Autorize -> Authorize
  p12, radiusDynAuthServDisconNakAuthOnlyRequests:
    Autorize -> Authorize
  p14, radiusDynAuthServCoAAuthOnlyRequests:
    Autorize -> Authorize
  p15, radiusDynAuthServCoANakAuthOnlyRequests:
    Autorize -> Authorize
  p19, radiusDynAuthServerAuthOnlyGroup:
    Autorize -> Authorize
  p21, Section 5: IPSec -> IPsec

draft-ietf-radext-dynauth-client-mib-02.txt
  p1, Abstract:  RFC3576 -> RFC 3576
  p10, radiusDynAuthClientDisconAuthOnlyRequests:
    Autorize -> Authorize
  p11, radiusDynAuthClientDisconNakAuthOnlyRequest:
    Autorize -> Authorize
  p14, radiusDynAuthClientCoAAuthOnlyRequest:
    Autorize -> Authorize
  p15, radiusDynAuthClientCoANakAuthOnlyRequest:
    Autorize -> Authorize
  p19, radiusDynAuthClientAuthOnlyGroup:
    Autorize -> Authorize
  p21, Section 5:  IPSec -> IPsec


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RE: Issue: Cmts on 3576 MIBs Nagi Reddy Jonnala (njonnala)
Issue: Cmts on 3576 MIBs Greg Weber (gdweber)