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Re: WGLC comments on draft-ietf-radext-tunnel-type-00.txt

"Greg Weber" <gdweber@gmail.com> Sun, 14 December 2008 16:22 UTC

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Date: Sun, 14 Dec 2008 11:19:47 -0500
From: Greg Weber <gdweber@gmail.com>
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Subject: Re: WGLC comments on draft-ietf-radext-tunnel-type-00.txt
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I liked the proposed title change too (below).

Also, the current text has one error and one warning in idnits.


On Tue, Nov 25, 2008 at 4:54 PM, David B. Nelson
<dnelson@elbrysnetworks.com> wrote:
> Glen Zorn writes...
>
>> The title is so vague as to be meaningless: suggest changing to the
>> extremely unwieldy "A RADIUS Tunnel Type for IP Encapsulating Security
>> Payload (ESP) in the Tunnel-mode with IKEv2" or some such thing (see
>> below), w/an appropriate abbreviation for the second & following pages.
>
> Agreed.
>
<snip>

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