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Re: [radext] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-03

Alan DeKok <aland@deployingradius.com> Wed, 22 April 2015 19:29 UTC

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Subject: Re: [radext] Start of WGLC for draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-03
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On Apr 22, 2015, at 6:21 AM, Dean cheng <dean.cheng@huawei.com> wrote:
> We've just posted the 04 text that addressed comments
> posted by Alan. It is:
> 
> http://tools.ietf.org/html/draft-ietf-radext-ip-port-radius-ext-04

  On a quick scan, it looks good.  The only minor nit is the ASCII art.  You have a field ending at the end of a line, and then continuing on the next line:

	... | Field-Name |
      | Field-Name | ...

  It should just be:

	... | Field-Name 
       Field-Name | ...

  i.e. without the last | on the first line, and the first | on the next line.

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