Re: [Rats] USSC Draft Working Group Last Call

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From: "lgl island-resort.com" <lgl@island-resort.com>
To: Thomas Fossati <thomas.fossati@linaro.org>
CC: Kathleen Moriarty <kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com>, rats <rats@ietf.org>
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Hi Thomas,

This is about these two lines at the end of appendix A, I think.

;;; insert CDDL from RFC9052 to complete these CDDL definitions.
;# include RFC9052

Looks to me they were intended as use of CDDL new #include construct. #include is defined in draft-ietf-cbor-cddl-modules-00 which is adopted but not past the -00 draft. Seems like we should remove these two lines since it would be normative reference to something not ready.

I don’t think this is anything of consequence — just a little fix in the wake of the WGLC.

LL




On Dec 5, 2023, at 6:13 AM, Thomas Fossati <thomas.fossati@linaro.org<mailto:thomas.fossati@linaro.org>> wrote:

hi Kathleen,

On Tue, 5 Dec 2023 at 12:27, Kathleen Moriarty
<kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com<mailto:kathleen.moriarty.ietf@gmail.com>> wrote:
Thank you to the UCCS authors and others for your diligence in resolving the issues from the first WG last call. The draft is ready for a second 2 week last call. Please share any comments you have on the draft on the list from this round of reviews. If you read the updated version and are happy with the changes, that is also important to note.

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-rats-uccs/
Thank you!

My previous +1mod(nits) still hold [1].

cheers, thanks!

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/rats/iQ32uScNs2lcsAm9WJltbYJb894/

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