Re: [Rats] I-D Action: draft-ietf-rats-architecture-22.txt

Michael Richardson <mcr+ietf@sandelman.ca> Wed, 28 September 2022 11:35 UTC

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internet-drafts@ietf.org wrote:
    >         Title : Remote Attestation Procedures Architecture Authors :
    > Henk Birkholz Dave Thaler Michael Richardson Ned Smith Wei Pan Filename
    > : draft-ietf-rats-architecture-22.txt Pages : 57 Date : 2022-09-28

...

    > A diff from the previous version is available at:
    > https://www.ietf.org/rfcdiff?url2=draft-ietf-rats-architecture-22

I have dealt with all of the IESG COMMENTS that I was able to.
I don't know how to improve Figure 3 for Paul.  If someone else has an idea,
please say so.


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