Re: [Raw] WG Last Call: draft-ietf-raw-architecture-11

[Lou Berger <[e-mail]>]

Hi,

I'm going to fail to get all my comments in by today's deadline, but 
will write them on on the plane tomorrow.  They are going to build on my 
previous comments sent to the RAW list that were never fully addressed 
in [1] and in previous sessions.

The big one is alignment of terminology of the document with the rest of 
DetNet/TE, including (for example):
     Track vs protection path
     RAW SLA/SLO/SL vs TEAS definitions
     aCPF/PSE vs  detnet  (and other WG) protection terminology

Others include description of DetNet domains that span wireless (RAW) 
and wired networks, and operation of RAW over wireless networks defined 
by outside of IETF (which may or may not support DLEP).

I'll send more  tomorrow.

Thanks,

Lou

[1] https://mailarchive.ietf.org/arch/msg/raw/1czSAxtRt94lpv_KZPGb5N3l3ko/

On 6/23/2023 1:11 PM, Eve Schooler wrote:
> All,
>
> This starts working group last call on draft-ietf-raw-architecture-11
> https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-raw-architecture/  <https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-detnet-pof/>
>
> The working group last call ends on Friday, July 21st, the Friday before IETF 117.
> Please send your comments to the working group mailing list.
>
> Two IPR disclosures have been made for this document thus far (in tandem with WGLC, in a separate e-mail, we will solicit all co-authors/contributors for any additional disclosures).
> All comments, e.g., "I've reviewed this document and believe it is ready for publication", are welcome.
> This is useful and important, even from authors.
> In preparation for the transition of the RAW WG to roll back into the DetNet WG, we are issuing this as a joint WGLC to both WGs.
> Thank you,
> Eve (RAW Co-Chair & doc Shepherd)